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©2008-2009 ~siaorie
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ORIGINAL SIZE OF WORK : 16" X 20"

its hard to say where this belongs. However it is an abstracted horse. it was originally based of the designs on viking doors, where animals were long abstracted forms entwined with background details. instead here in blue horse i used the basic curves of the animal then gave sharp lines inside the body to move away from the smoothness line in viking art to almost a cubist style of harsh pointed lines. the background has one of my own stylistic traits depicted as the swirling trees or vines behind the creature on the foreground. other than that i tried to give a receding or realistic sense to the remaining parts of the image.

colored pencils
Black cresent board.
time.. estimate of 16 hours over 4 month span

NOTICE! DO TO THE POOR QUALITY OF THE IMAGE I SHALL BE SUBMITTING A DUPLICATE OF BLUE HORSE IN DUE TIME. HOPEFULLY ONE THAT IS NOT PIXILATED OR WITH FILM GRAINS. THE IMAGE ITSELF MAY CHANGE IN THE PROCESS, AS IN TONES AND COLOR. THANKS FOR THE COMMENTS AND FAVORITES AND I TRUST THIS ALTERATION WILL MAKE A BIG DIFFERENCE AND ENHANCE THE VISUAL QUALITY TO AN ACCEPTABLE STATUS.

RECENTLY WHEN BROWSING THE INTERNET I NOTICED THIS WORK FEATURED ON ANOTHER SITE . I WAS NOT TOLD OF THIS AND EVEN THOUGH CREDIT IS GIVEN , I WOULD LIKE TO BE TOLD IF IT IS TO BE FEATURED OUTSIDE OF DEVIANT ART.

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:icontamarack1pines:
Has your deviation been fixed? :aww:

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Remember, remember, the Fifth of November...
--V For Vendetta
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:iconsiaorie:
yes it has this is the new . so you can full view

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"looking off into the distance...
reach into the window of your mind.....
...and dream."-me
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:icontamarack1pines:
I DID! :shakefist: :giggle:

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Remember, remember, the Fifth of November...
--V For Vendetta
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42:8 (G N B)
:icondragoneyzs:
I like the way this looks....so neat! :D

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:icontasts806:
This picture could do with a better file quality.

I'm not a big fan of what I think are stars. Not the trees for that matter.

Moon isn't great. Some of the shames on the body are odd. Mane has a few weird points.

I appriciate the tree's shadows and the whole grass area. It's very well done.

Moon's reflection is a bit big, but believeable.

The rest of the horse not previously is excelent.

<3 your little siggy in the corner. Very stylish.

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"Patient had waffles for breakfast and anorexia for lunch."
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yes i know the file has issues and if i change it .. again ill lose all the data favs and . comments. sadly the image is high quality aswell. if i do submit a better quality picture. it will be of the same thing and a different name. i dont want to send out a ton of notes if i alter the file once more D8

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"looking off into the distance...
reach into the window of your mind.....
...and dream."-me
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:icongautman88:
wonderful piece ...the moonlight night atmosphere is so perfectly captured ..you have used perfect set of colors to depict the scene ....and the grass gives a feeling of a mild and chilly breeze. Very beautiful ..i wish i was IN that scene :)

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"I feel inferior to none, because I have no desire to be superior to any" - Yoka Daishi
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:iconsiaorie:
thank you for the wonderful comment. and im surprised you noticed the wind effect i had created. i was hoping someone would with out me having to state it in the artists comments

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"looking off into the distance...
reach into the window of your mind.....
...and dream."-me
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:icongautman88:
you're welcome ...i am just completely dazzled by the surrealistic scene.. it is just so beautiful and untainted ..i mean if you actually visualize something like that:)

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"I feel inferior to none, because I have no desire to be superior to any" - Yoka Daishi
website
:iconsiaorie:
i have 4 other similar themed pieces, but this was the only completed work. also, awesome artistic vocabulary. you really picked apart the image like my top critics :D

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"looking off into the distance...
reach into the window of your mind.....
...and dream."-me
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Details

May 13, 2008
309 KB
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400×324

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minolta Co., Ltd.
DiMAGE E323
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F/2.8
6 mm
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May 6, 2008, 4:10:53 AM

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